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Important Things by ~HawkeyeRiza37:iconHawkeyeRiza37:



          Almost out the door now; pausing at the welcome mat. He could tell this by the tick of the dead bold sliding away to allow passage through. He could almost hear her breathing in that first breath of morning air.
          Edward leapt out of bed and flew down the hallway towards the front door.
          “Riza!”
          She turned just as his fingers reached her shoulder.
          “Edward…?”
          Not caring that the covers lay in an elongated heap along the rug in the hall, or that any passerby would glimpse his scantily covered body, shivering slightly in the early-morning chill, he smiled as he found her eyes.
          “Have a good day!”
          Her eyebrows rose, and her reply was silence. Lips parting in disbelief, she seemed to want to question him, but, an instant later, she was smiling and shaking her head.
          “Thank you,” she said, and genuinely meant it.
          After granting him a kiss on the forehead, she left him in the front hall.
          Edward smiled after her for a few moments, and then yawned dramatically. The early wake-up call was both unplanned and premature, but he didn’t mind. After all, he thought as he strode back into the bedroom, retrieving the sheets, sometimes you just have to make sacrifices in order to do what’s most important.
©2009-2010 ~HawkeyeRiza37
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Author's Comments

Because simply seeing someone off in the morning is one of life's most important things!

I kinda wanna make an "Important Things" series, but I've only got one other piece so far and I'm not sure how much I like it...:shrug:

This one, however, I think is quite cute. Simple, adorable, etc; you know, the usual.

...I wrote Ed sounding so young here, though....

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww cute...:)

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i am fire and frost.


got a problem *pyshco smile*

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Hmm...I'm trying to think of other "important things" to help you out...but I'm drawing a blank.

But yeah, I feel weird if I sleep in and all my family has taken off to do stuff. It makes you feel like you've missed something really important.

Great job :D

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"If goldfish are kept in a small bowl, they will remain small. With more space, the fish can double, triple or quadruple its size." -Edward Bloom (Ewan McGregor), Big Fish
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If you do, don't hesitate to bring them up!

I kind of like waking up by myself sometimes. The house is quiet and I have time to just wake up in peaceful silence. But I love waking up with them home, too, cuz' we all chill around the kitchen/family room and talk and stuffs.

Thank you!!

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"Why? Because he's Edward f***ing Elric!"

"REPLICAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

:heart:EdxRiza:heart: :heart:AschxLuke:heart:

Proud member of Team Edo!
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I will be thinking. And you're welcome :heart:

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"If goldfish are kept in a small bowl, they will remain small. With more space, the fish can double, triple or quadruple its size." -Edward Bloom (Ewan McGregor), Big Fish
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Yeah, he does sound really young, but it's a good thing.

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I am Alex Louise Armstrong in the Fullmetal Alchemist crew.

Y\'know, I just stopped caring.

Whenever Kaiba smiles,
A PUPPY DIES!
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No it's not! TTwTT Made me feel like a cradle-robber!

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"Why? Because he's Edward f***ing Elric!"

"REPLICAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

:heart:EdxRiza:heart: :heart:AschxLuke:heart:

Proud member of Team Edo!
:iconhangmanheadphones:
And...?

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I am Alex Louise Armstrong in the Fullmetal Alchemist crew.

Y\'know, I just stopped caring.

Whenever Kaiba smiles,
A PUPPY DIES!

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